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freeand2sexy
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since 09-12-2008
Posts 703
CA, USA


0 posted 03-22-2010 06:39 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Definitely not the greatest poem I've written, but there was something in me, that had to write it.

The sorry you never got

You hate me,
Yeah I know!

I held your secret
Between the palm of my hands
And you trusted me to keep it safe,
But I just had to let it fly off.

You hate me,
Yeah I know!

Mouthing off lies
And half truths.
Oh I just had, Just Had
To find something on you.

You hate me,
Yeah I know!

I led you into a house of mirrors,
Said "I love you"
But only to use you
And then throw you away.

You hate me,
Yeah I know!

I yelled and screamed
With slurring words.
Too drunk to see
Who I hurt.

You hate me,
Yeah I know!

You came from me
Yet I never told you
That I loved you,
Or hugged you like I should.

You hate me,
Yeah I know!

To blood and pain,
I brought you to that place.
I let the broken tears
Flow down such a precious face.

You Hate Me,
Yeah… I Know!

I Hate Me, Too!

I'm Sorry!!!

So...
So...

Sorry!
Please forgive me!


(inspired by many poems on these forums, and in other forums)


Bear with each other and forgive whatever grievances you may have against one another. Forgive as the Lord forgave you. (Colossians 3:13)


But I tell you who hear me: Love your enemies, do good to those who hate you, bless those who curse you, and pray for those who mistreat you. (Luke 6:27-28)


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LoveAbounds
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since 07-15-2009
Posts 38


1 posted 04-03-2010 08:46 PM       View Profile for LoveAbounds   Email LoveAbounds   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveAbounds

I love it.

"For God has not given us the spirit of fear, but of love, and of power, and of a sound mind." - 2 Timothy 1:7

freeand2sexy
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since 09-12-2008
Posts 703
CA, USA


2 posted 04-05-2010 10:09 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Thanks!!!

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

kjsd
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since 01-07-2010
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3 posted 04-08-2010 08:59 PM       View Profile for kjsd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kjsd

asome peom
Bailey
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since 04-09-2010
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4 posted 04-09-2010 01:01 PM       View Profile for Bailey   Email Bailey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bailey

This is the first poem I have read since joing and I love it!

Bailey

freeand2sexy
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since 09-12-2008
Posts 703
CA, USA


5 posted 04-09-2010 05:07 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Thanks!!!

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

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