My House- (inspired by Christine)

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Teen Poetry #9

My House- (inspired by Christine)

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2010-03-21 02:10 PM

My House

In my big front yard
there lies a carpet of green
surrounded by white picket
the nicest i've seen

yellow paint on the outside
freshly redone
brings out the happy
a reflexion of sun

inside its a mansion
with cristal chandeliers
the fridge stocks itself
and theres plenty of beers

I know ill find it
one day I will
but I guess ill stay
in this shack until...

ha so I still have writers block shucks..

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

1 posted 2010-03-22 10:51 AM

Aw, I'm glad my poem could inspire someone.

Great poem! Love it!

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

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