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Kim
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Surrounded.
I sit in a room,
crowded.
I am alone.

They talk,
they laugh,
they shout,
unaware.

I give a silent scream.
Help.

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Man do I know how that feels. I like the simplicity of this. Nice job.

-Zach

Wish I could find love.. But all I find these days are superficial fish in shallow waters.

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Kim,
Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed your poem, I think this is an excellent first post
Krysti
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