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XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland


0 posted 03-16-2010 11:12 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX


Blinding thoughts of happiness,
how they consume my mind.
The warmth of the sun,
the smell of the air...
But it's all a waste of time.

I know I can not smile,
it hurts me to pretend.
The ache in my chest,
the tears in my eyes...
My heart needs time to mend.

But winter is almost over,
it's laughter is somewhere far.
Tears will dry,
warmth will come...
and life will leave it's scar.

{~~*~~}
-though the last line may imply, this poem is not about death.
Thanks for reading.

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

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Leanne <3
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1 posted 03-17-2010 01:29 AM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

wow amazing write!! i just wanted to read it over and over!
great work
-Lee
XxForever.BrokenxX
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2 posted 03-17-2010 05:20 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Thank you.  


{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

freeand2sexy
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3 posted 03-19-2010 01:53 AM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Great poem!!!

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

Kim
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4 posted 03-20-2010 05:11 PM       View Profile for Kim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kim

A great poem, I started reading and it just spoke out to me.

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5 posted 03-21-2010 01:33 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

great flow. well written.. ENJOYED
XxForever.BrokenxX
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6 posted 04-05-2010 12:16 AM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

I appreciate all your comments. Thank you.
{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

 
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