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Stitches
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0 posted 03-15-2010 05:15 PM       View Profile for Stitches   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Stitches


I'll cry one day,
When you are gone,
And I look back then,
At this song.

I'll cry one day,
When I finally see,
What you and I,
Were supposed to be.

I'll cry one day ,
As this stretch ends,
When I no longer,
Call us friends.

I'll die one day,
Because it'll get too much,
When I can't lean
On my neglected crutch.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

© Copyright 2010 Gabrielle Cohen - All Rights Reserved
Chalmette Guy
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1 posted 03-17-2010 09:03 AM       View Profile for Chalmette Guy   Email Chalmette Guy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chalmette Guy

That last stanza is awesome.
I liked this.
Stitches
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2 posted 03-17-2010 06:17 PM       View Profile for Stitches   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Stitches

Thanks

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

Leanne <3
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3 posted 03-21-2010 07:52 PM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

aww really enjoyed this one!

"I'll cry one day ,
As this stretch ends,
When I no longer,
Call us friends"

This stanza just hits home!!
great write
-Lee
Stitches
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4 posted 03-22-2010 05:43 AM       View Profile for Stitches   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Stitches

Awe thanks

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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