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i love my guy

i love my guy
he is so sweet
i love my guy and
he loves me
i love my guy
he is the best
i love my guy
he is mine
nobody can take him
he belongs with me
he wont let anybody take him
he loves me
i love my guy
he is so sweet
i love my guy and
he loves me
i love my guy
he is the best
i love my guy
he is mine

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1 posted 03-22-2010 05:47 AM       View Profile for Stitches   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Stitches

The repetition really conveys a sense of obsession.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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Young love does not know the boundaries of obsession and extremely likeness.
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i did not mean to be like that i was just expersing my fellings of that time
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i wish i could take all my poems out because he dumped me
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