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0 posted 03-11-2010 09:59 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Abuse does some crazy...stuff.. to ya.. just venting out emotions held under.

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I've been locked in a cage
Held behind rusted bars
I was cursed at and beaten

Because somewhere I did wrong

I've been silenced
For my words held no meaning
but only to them

I was a coward for I feared
That what I did or said
hurt someone else or sometimes me

For somewhere I did wrong

People tell me it wasn't my fault
That I was the victim
But they didn't let me ever speak

For my words have gotten lost
Among the sea of forgetfulness
And somewhere I was forgotten

because somewhere I did wrong

And now that I've been left to sing
A song no one wants to hear
Will I be forgotten among the crowd?

Or be known for where I went wrong?
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1 posted 03-15-2010 01:28 AM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

ohh i just loved this!!

but believe me your situation sounds like it has everything to do with where someone else went wrong, not you!
take care
-Lee
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This hits a very personel note with me. Thanks for posting it.

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3 posted 03-15-2010 05:04 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Yeah Lee, but depression has a way of turning the pointed finger back at their self. Ya know? Thanks for the concern.

Z, glad you liked it.

-Zach

Wish I could find love.. But all I find these days are superficial fish in shallow waters.

 
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