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UNTAMEDelegance
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since 05-30-2009
Posts 224
Oregon


0 posted 03-10-2010 07:47 PM       View Profile for UNTAMEDelegance   Email UNTAMEDelegance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for UNTAMEDelegance

That's what you see
when you look in my eyes.
Broken, recycling,
reusable, right?

I'm just the girl
that you all passed around.
Used and abused
'til the new toy was found.

It's not like you loved me;
I thought that you did.
I really don't know
who I'm trying to kid.

I'm just the pretty,
reusable toy,
the puppet, the prize
for the next charming boy.

The one that will hold me
and quiet my cries.
Sweet, whispered nothings
and cruel, tender lies.

They'll love and hug me
like the "pet" I've become,
then throw me away
when they're done with the fun.

The boys that suround me,
each one is the same;
they all want their "brag rights,"
they all want a claim.

Because of their "loving,"
because of their lies
I've learned not to trust them,
to not bat and eye.

I've been beaten and broken
by boy after boy,
I'm the reusable, thrown out,
recyclable toy.
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Leanne <3
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since 08-25-2007
Posts 217
N.S.W, Australia


1 posted 03-11-2010 12:25 AM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

A feeling i know alot about, you worded it all perfectly!!
just loved it  
-Lee
UNTAMEDelegance
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since 05-30-2009
Posts 224
Oregon


2 posted 03-11-2010 01:08 AM       View Profile for UNTAMEDelegance   Email UNTAMEDelegance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for UNTAMEDelegance

Thank you so much. It means a lot to hear positive feedback on my poems! =^.^=
                               ~UNTAMEDelegance
Falling rain
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since 01-31-2008
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Small town, Illinois


3 posted 03-11-2010 12:15 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Wow. This is one of your absolute best poems! I really liked how the story flowed very smoothly. Great job!

-Zach

Wish I could find love.. But all I find these days are superficial fish in shallow waters.

Zeigeist
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since 12-09-2009
Posts 312
Michigan


4 posted 03-11-2010 12:21 PM       View Profile for Zeigeist   Email Zeigeist   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zeigeist

I liked this one. Strong emotions without being over the top to much. Nice writing.

Zeitgeist.
WanderingWillow
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since 08-28-2010
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5 posted 08-28-2010 09:35 PM       View Profile for WanderingWillow   Email WanderingWillow   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for WanderingWillow

I googled you, I looked you up, I created an account, All because I needed to read this poem again. I  had it stuck in my head, and it fits how I feel right now... You are such an amazing artist, and in so many ways. ~That other Gemini girl~ xD
Stitches
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since 11-27-2009
Posts 151
United Kingdom


6 posted 09-08-2010 07:49 AM       View Profile for Stitches   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Stitches

This is total perfection.

Library for sure.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

*tori_rose*
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since 10-12-2010
Posts 44
Weber City, VA


7 posted 10-14-2010 08:26 PM       View Profile for *tori_rose*   Email *tori_rose*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *tori_rose*

i understand this poem way to well im sorry to say ...you spoke the truth and it was very good hit close to home with it

~*tori*~

animecrazy71
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since 10-01-2010
Posts 16
Pakistan


8 posted 10-16-2010 07:07 AM       View Profile for animecrazy71   Email animecrazy71   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit animecrazy71's Home Page   View IP for animecrazy71

very nice. The flow of the poem was smooth....i really liked it
sammy9698
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since 10-16-2010
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9 posted 10-16-2010 04:30 PM       View Profile for sammy9698   Email sammy9698   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sammy9698

I loved it. It flowed great and expressed a lot feelings that i feel. Great job
XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
Posts 1416
Rekjavik Iceland


10 posted 01-05-2011 08:23 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Once more you have not failed to delight, tantalize, provoke and entertain with the thoughts of your heart. Truly, UNTAMEDelegance.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

 
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