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Thunder! Captures me.
Lightning! Strengthens me.
Rain! Revives me.

My hair is snake-like, drenched.
It hisses ‘round my neck.
My lips are sweet pea plants.
The wind, it beats them, chapped.

These hands, they tremble, cold.
Your hands, they shake, also.
Our feet, they slip, in mud.
To sink, they weigh, so much.

Water? Dry? Is it?
Thunder, silent? Yes?
Sun, so warm, now….
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