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XxForever.BrokenxX
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I'm searching for a way to go,
a path to lead me back.
But how can I find the truth you told?
that one solitary fact.

If home is where the heart is,
I'll be stuck for quite a while.
Swimming in the lies you told me,
trying to hide those smiles.

I'll never give in to you,
though you chase me in my dreams.
Running forever I'll stay afloat,
fear flowing in this stream.

Bitter-sweet and unwanted,
I can taste the secrets' disease,
The truth is be but a whisper,
hanging in the breeze.

I'm not lost, I'm running.


{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

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RevengeIsMine
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1 posted 03-04-2010 12:53 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

I'm not lost i'm running....

I've been telling myself this for years and years.. truth is, i'm always running.. and i don't stop long enough to know where i am, so therefore i can't possibly be lost..

Amazing poem em..

Always making me proud!!

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Chalmette Guy
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2 posted 03-04-2010 11:49 AM       View Profile for Chalmette Guy   Email Chalmette Guy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chalmette Guy

These were very cool lines here:

Bitter-sweet and unwanted,
I can taste the secrets' disease,
The truth is be but a whisper,
hanging in the breeze.


I enjoyed this poem. Keep 'em coming.
Falling rain
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3 posted 03-04-2010 04:34 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

See Em? Your getting way better at rhyming! I really love the last stanza. Great work!

Wish I could find love.. But all I find these days are superficial fish in shallow waters.

Zeigeist
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4 posted 03-04-2010 07:10 PM       View Profile for Zeigeist   Email Zeigeist   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zeigeist

I enjoyed this. Good work

Zeitgeist.
XxForever.BrokenxX
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5 posted 03-04-2010 09:26 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Thanks to all of you. I really appreciate all the comments.

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

 
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