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I wore my certain darken shades
That would eventually make me fade
Into the backdrop of the crowd

But the world wouldn't let me go
I was scared to death and believe it so
So I shut my mouth and went by plan

I obeyed their every rule
No matter how I felt like a fool
to shaped myself into their mold

I'd smile and make them believe
That it was honestly making me deceive
Myself. I was so confused

I just felt like I didn't stand a chance
That my pointless acts to entrance
Wasn't anything like me

It's just not my place
To wake up and wear a face
That never seemed to belong to me...  

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1 posted 03-03-2010 07:41 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

I added this to my favorites on dA but I didn't comment so let me just say that this is really, really good. You have become a wonderful writer over the last two years, and I mean that.

Fantastic write,
              -Emmalee


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....i like your idea of the darken shades making you fade into the backdrop of the crowd..
great thinking! ;p
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Never one's place, but everyone seems to where a face at times. That is for definate.
 
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