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Marine4life
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They don't know that they hurt me
They don't know how they did.
I don't know why they hurt me
I was just a little kid.

I didn't know what was going on
I didn't know that it was bad
when he meets with me again
I bet he wish he never had.

The muffled cry's they did not hear
I fell down weak without a tear
for with my siblings I could not fall
because I siblings I gave my all.

Everyday I hated my life
for everyday i had to strive,
to protect my siblings
and to stay alive.

Every night we lay awake
cold and hungry with stomach quakes,
every night we lay in fear
wondering why as the day drew near.

If you couldn't tell this is about when i was a little kid i don't like talking about it but i find it suprisingly easy to write about. this is my 1st post let me know what ya'll think

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2 posted 03-01-2010 08:32 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Dude (Dudette?)I know how ya feel. I was one of the unfortunate to get abused by my father. Although each of us go through different situations, we all share the same pain. (well for the most part) This is a great poem considering its your first. Keep on writing.

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unfinishedlife
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3 posted 03-07-2010 01:18 PM       View Profile for unfinishedlife   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for unfinishedlife

Many people really can relate to this...
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