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One Day, Some Day

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Octave
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0 posted 02-12-2010 03:01 PM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Octave

Entirely experimental. Flow is out the window. This is just...well. You'll see. I was having a play around.


One Day, Some Day

Some day weíll find one day
To lie back and make it ours
And Iíll laugh in the face of the faceless and faithless
And laugh in the face of myself

So take it or leave it, though Iíd rather steal it
Just to be different and just to be out there
But out there ainít so cool when you canít get back in
And you donít really want to either

Canít go blaming it on the horoscopes or cards or growing pains
Or the bottom of a tea cup that holds nothing but coffee stains
And you got impeccable aim for that ceiling fan
And you got impeccable art for feeliní down

So find it and [    ] it and shoot it down
And wear black with brown and swear on the life
Of the lifeless and worthless and tasteless words
Of the guy in the gutter and the girl in the speaker

Crash the system and curse in the face of the error
With its techno print and red writing and nominal terror
Its funny how we choose to ignore but even funnier
That ignorance ainít really bliss. But is it?

So, some day weíll find one day
To lie back and make it ours
And Iíll laugh in the face of the faceless and faithless
And laugh in the face of myself.
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Leanne <3
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1 posted 02-12-2010 10:25 PM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

raised alot of questions, really enjoyed reading it
great write
-Lee
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2 posted 02-19-2010 05:29 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

so what goes in the brackets? [ ]
 
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