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UNTAMEDelegance
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since 2009-05-30
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Oregon

0 posted 2010-02-08 02:47 PM


The wind softly ruffles my hair;
the good wind; the strong wind;
the clean wind; the soft wind.

The untainted sigh of the world;
the world that saw me grow
with billions of other people.

The sea sounds, crashing in my ears;
the mighty sea; the proud sea;
the bright sea; the wide sea.

The ever-stong voice of the world;
the world that gave me life
with ten billion other lives.

The sky enchants my gazing eyes;
the great sky; the cold sky;
the light sky; the free sky.

The enigmatic eyes of the world;
the world that saw my first breath
with ten billion other breaths.

My heart finds peace in the world's song;
the sweet song; the fierce song;
the frenzied song; the calm song;
my song.

The purest sound in the world;
the world that gave me my song
and ten billion other songs
for me to sing.

© Copyright 2010 Melissa ReneĆ© Axtell - All Rights Reserved
Leanne <3
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since 2007-08-25
Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia
1 posted 2010-02-09 12:09 PM


really enjoyed really this!! the phrasing of it was really different
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