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stuck between these voices

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LOSTinTHISworld
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since 06-01-2003
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canada


0 posted 02-04-2010 09:28 PM       View Profile for LOSTinTHISworld   Email LOSTinTHISworld   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LOSTinTHISworld

theres a girl inside of me
and she's fighting, begging me
to hold on, don't let go
she's the girl
who cries out loud
the girl who asks for help
she's scared
but she knows your there

theres a girl inside of me
and she's dying, begging me
the let go, don't hold on
she's the girl
who shuts you out
the girl who destroys herself
she's not scared
and she doesn't care

here i am stuck
between these voices
they've taken over me
who do i trust
do i keep fighting
not knowing where it will take me
or do i let go hoping
i could be free at last

theres a girl inside of me
and she's hiding
but she needs you to see
she's not leaving, its not time

theres a girl inside of me
and she's angry
and she needs you to see
she's ready, to say goodbye

here i am stuck
between these voices
they've taken over me
who do i trust
do i keep fighting
not knowing where it will take me
or do i let go hoping
i could be free at last

theres a girl inside of me
and she's hiding
but she needs you to see
i'm not going anywhere
i will keep fighting
not knowinng where it will take me
i won't let go not knowing
if i could be free

memento mori

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Marine4life
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1 posted 02-28-2010 02:09 AM       View Profile for Marine4life   Email Marine4life   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marine4life

this is really good i can strongly realtate to what your saying about having another side that your not sure if you should show  but keep up  th e good work
XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland


2 posted 02-28-2010 10:28 AM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Wow. I can't even think of anything to say except that this is amazing and it is going in my library.
Fantastic write,

{~~*~~}

p.s. I really like the title.



EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..
BrittanyJ
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Come find me?


3 posted 03-02-2010 03:23 PM       View Profile for BrittanyJ   Email BrittanyJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrittanyJ

Love this

Do you really love me? Or should i just let go now??

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