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Jeremy
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since 2010-01-29
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0 posted 2010-02-04 08:29 PM



Dear Molester

Do you remember me
Or just my body...
I remember that night, that week, that season
Did I satisfy your lust. Was there another reason
Did you enjoy me
Or just my body...
They say blood is thicker than water
Is that why you chose me and not her
Did you really like me
Or just my body...
You came to me one day
You said it was just a game
I wish the game was between you and me
But it was between you and my body...
Ten years have gone by
I heard you were still alive
I thought I'd send you this letter
To say things are better
I'd meet you personally...to forgive you
But I think I'd pull the trigger too soon

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eternalbeauty
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since 2010-03-23
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1 posted 2010-03-25 10:39 PM


I really like the truth of this poem. great job.

mella:)<3

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2 posted 2010-03-26 12:07 PM


This brought up really bad memories.. I've had this happen to me before.. I'm sorry. Hope things get better for you.

nice write,

-Zach

Wish I could find love.. But all I find these days are superficial fish in shallow waters.

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