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Alone

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ThatOneGuy
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Indiana, United States


0 posted 02-02-2010 02:17 AM       View Profile for ThatOneGuy   Email ThatOneGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThatOneGuy

Iíve never fallen this hard before
I never knew how this would feel
And I donít know what to believe anymore
ĎCause nothing in my life seems real

Thereís no one left beside me
I lost it all when i lost you
And, as I sit here praying for a sign
I tell everyone else Iím just fine

Iíve fallen back into my scarred past
I donít know how to talk to anyone
And it scares me because I wonder
Where Iíll be when itís all said and done

I remember the night you said
Youíd always be right there
Laying next to me in my bed
But, did you ever really care?

I had myself convinced I was okay
Told myself I didnít need anyone
But I realized something today
Thereís nowhere left for me to run

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UNTAMEDelegance
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1 posted 02-09-2010 02:28 PM       View Profile for UNTAMEDelegance   Email UNTAMEDelegance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for UNTAMEDelegance

Once again, you've managed to write a poem that tries to pierce my heart. It seems like the two poems that I've read of yours are echoes of my own mind and feelings.
                                ~UNTAMEDelegance
ThatOneGuy
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2 posted 02-16-2010 12:43 AM       View Profile for ThatOneGuy   Email ThatOneGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThatOneGuy

I think a lot of people probably feel the same way at times. Thanks for commenting on my stuff
 
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