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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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Something about this I don't like. Hmmm. ----------------------------------------------- I'm not coming down from a high I'm enjoy life and not changing my way Don't move those lips For ratty words all you got to say We've been through it once Now here we're again Not letting ya in for any price Say you've changed. Since when? Don't worry I'm burning bridges Going from shore to shore Quit your nagging pleads Your such a bore Do your dirty words come out to play where your groveling and feeling hurt? Throw your daggers all you want Your still playing in the dirt Don't worry now my armors on its high I'm not being dragged into this game Breaking away from you is simple Wish you could feel the same Don't flatter me with inadequate lies Quit reliving those emotions long dead For I'm doing just fine Got my armor built up. Armed with a heart of led |
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wicked Junior Member
since 2010-01-29
Posts 22Florida, USA |
wow. this one is pretty brutal. whoever inspired you to write this should feel very sorry for whatever they did, if anything at all. beautiful writing though. I am that I am, |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Sad thing is that my father was the one who inspired this.. :/ But thanks for the comment. |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
 *hugs*{~~*~~} EmilyTheStrange |
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Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia |
Zach this one just blew me away it was such a strong poem, i hope everything is ok! -Lee |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
ehhh not really Leanne. But thanks for the concern and the comment.  |
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darkbluelove New Member
since 2010-03-07
Posts 2 |
amazingg. thats all i can say |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Thank you! -Zach Wish I could find love.. But all I find these days are superficial fish in shallow waters. |
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wolfy09 Member
since 2008-06-10
Posts 93 |
wow very strong piece. i adore all of the poems i read written by you. |
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banished_fairy Junior Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 31Happy in H*ll, PA |
As a parent, it hurt me to know this is about your father. I do not even attempt to assume to know anything about your relationship. I do; however, know that parents sometimes say things we later regret. I do hope that you have not been "burning bridges". As for the poetry, achingly haunting. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I can understand that some parents regret some of the things they say and do. I can respect that. But one someone doesn't acknowledge their wrong doing. It isn't right. My father and I, I don't think, will never have a relationship like some have hoped. But thank you for reading. |
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Octave Member
since 2008-07-29
Posts 186Highlands, Scotland. |
I can relate strongly to you on this one. I'm sorry it has to be that way. Don't let him get you down. Good write, very powerful. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Thank you Octave |
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nehematala Member
since 2009-05-21
Posts 129 |
This is a very strong poem. I understand where you are coming from its always hard when you don't feel a parents love. I wish you all the best Michelle |
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