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Falling rain
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Something  about this I don't like. Hmmm.
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I'm not coming down from a high
I'm enjoy life and not changing my way
Don't move those lips
For ratty words all you got to say

We've been through it once
Now here we're again
Not letting ya in for any price
Say you've changed. Since when?

Don't worry I'm burning bridges
Going from shore to shore
Quit your nagging pleads
Your such a bore

Do your dirty words come out to play
where your groveling and feeling hurt?
Throw your daggers all you want
Your still playing in the dirt

Don't worry now my armors on its high
I'm not being dragged into this game
Breaking away from you is simple
Wish you could feel the same

Don't flatter me with inadequate lies
Quit reliving those emotions long dead
For I'm doing just fine
Got my armor built up. Armed with a heart of led


© Copyright 2010 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
wicked
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1 posted 01-30-2010 03:23 PM       View Profile for wicked   Email wicked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wicked

wow. this one is pretty brutal. whoever inspired you to write this should feel very sorry for whatever they did, if anything at all.

beautiful writing though.

I am that I am,
And that makes it me.
I float like a rock
But I sting like a bee.

Falling rain
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2 posted 01-30-2010 06:57 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Sad thing is that my father was the one who inspired this.. :/ But thanks for the comment.
XxForever.BrokenxX
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3 posted 01-30-2010 07:21 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

  *hugs*


{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

Leanne <3
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4 posted 01-30-2010 09:13 PM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

Zach this one just blew me away it was such a strong poem, i hope everything is ok!
-Lee
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5 posted 01-31-2010 04:06 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

ehhh not really Leanne. But thanks for the concern and the comment.   
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6 posted 03-07-2010 10:44 PM       View Profile for darkbluelove   Email darkbluelove   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for darkbluelove

amazingg. thats all i can say
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7 posted 03-08-2010 02:53 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Thank you!

-Zach

Wish I could find love.. But all I find these days are superficial fish in shallow waters.

wolfy09
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8 posted 04-16-2010 01:54 AM       View Profile for wolfy09   Email wolfy09   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wolfy09

wow very strong piece. i adore all of the poems i read written by you.
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As a parent, it hurt me to know this is about your father. I do not even attempt to assume to know anything about your relationship. I do; however, know that parents sometimes say things we later regret. I do hope that you have not been "burning bridges".
As for the poetry, achingly haunting.
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10 posted 04-16-2010 05:54 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I can understand that some parents regret some of the things they say and do. I can respect that. But one someone doesn't acknowledge their wrong doing. It isn't right. My father and I, I don't think, will never have a relationship like some have hoped. But thank you for reading.
Octave
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11 posted 04-17-2010 10:18 AM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Octave

I can relate strongly to you on this one. I'm sorry it has to be that way. Don't let him get you down.
Good write, very powerful.
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12 posted 04-18-2010 10:18 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Thank you Octave
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13 posted 04-19-2010 10:09 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

This is a very strong poem.
I understand where you are coming from its always hard when you don't feel a parents love.

I wish you all the best
Michelle
 
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