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Teen Poetry #9

The Boy That Never Bleeds

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

0 posted 2010-01-28 10:08 PM

That stone cold heart of yours
does it ever bleed,
tears of blackened sorrow?

Do they run down your cheeks
deep into your soul
scarring lively tissue?

Do they cluster in your throat
choke you for a moment
and leave you breathless forever more?

Do they drain the life from you
suck you dry
until all hope is lost?

That stone cold heart of yours
does it ever cry for just a second
so bad that the blood begins to trickle?

Inside this exterior, over which the eye might have roved there was the record of a pulsing life, which had learnt too well for its years – Thomas Har

Emi<3Naruto =]
Junior Member

since 2009-09-05

Posts 32

1 posted 2010-01-29 03:29 AM

wow this is really good. i could feel the emotion in your poem as if i was asking that question personally and those are the kind i like best

amazing job.

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

2 posted 2010-01-29 06:52 PM

Thankyou

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2010-01-30 02:33 PM

Oh my god.. Love this poem!! Definitely going in my library.

wicked
Junior Member

since 2010-01-29

Posts 22
Florida, USA

4 posted 2010-01-30 03:16 PM

wow that is really good.

I am that I am,
And that makes it me.
I float like a rock
But I sting like a bee.

KatVern17
Junior Member

since 2009-05-07

Posts 33

5 posted 2010-02-01 12:53 PM

I LOVE IT! I felt the emotion in it.

Can't wait to read more poems from you.

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

6 posted 2010-02-04 07:12 PM

im actually quite shocked to get such feedback on this poem, so thanks everyone

ThatOneGuy
Junior Member

since 2009-10-27

Posts 33
Indiana, United States

7 posted 2010-02-05 02:13 AM

i really like your writing

another very well done piece. you really are an inspiration, very well done!

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