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The Boy That Never Bleeds

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Leanne <3
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That stone cold heart of yours
does it ever bleed,
tears of blackened sorrow?

Do they run down your cheeks
deep into your soul
scarring lively tissue?

Do they cluster in your throat
choke you for a moment
and leave you breathless forever more?

Do they drain the life from you
suck you dry
until all hope is lost?

That stone cold heart of yours
does it ever cry for just a second
so bad that the blood begins to trickle?

Inside this exterior, over which the eye might have roved there was the record of a pulsing life, which had learnt too well for its years Thomas Har

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wow this is really good. i could feel the emotion in your poem as if i was asking that question personally and those are the kind i like best amazing job.
Leanne <3
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Thankyou
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Oh my god.. Love this poem!! Definitely going in my library.   
wicked
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4 posted 01-30-2010 03:16 PM       View Profile for wicked   Email wicked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wicked

wow that is really good.

I am that I am,
And that makes it me.
I float like a rock
But I sting like a bee.

KatVern17
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5 posted 02-01-2010 12:53 PM       View Profile for KatVern17   Email KatVern17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for KatVern17

I LOVE IT! I felt the emotion in it.
Can't wait to read more poems from you.

Leanne <3
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6 posted 02-04-2010 07:12 PM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

im actually quite shocked to get such feedback on this poem, so thanks everyone
ThatOneGuy
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7 posted 02-05-2010 02:13 AM       View Profile for ThatOneGuy   Email ThatOneGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThatOneGuy

i really like your writing another very well done piece. you really are an inspiration, very well done!
 
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