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Stitches
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0 posted 01-28-2010 01:21 PM       View Profile for Stitches   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Stitches

Take everything from me
Take every memory
and make it even.

They say when you take the person
The memories we treasure
but they serve to torment us
at the mind's leisure.

Make my mind at peace
Let me rest at ease
Let these false hopes cease
Now and forever
Let it be never.

If I can't have all
I'd rather not have any
There's no substitute
Though I've ripped through many.
You were the spider's web that caught my fall,
If I can't have you, I'd rather nothing at all.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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1 posted 01-28-2010 02:12 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

enjoyed this!

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2 posted 01-28-2010 02:13 PM       View Profile for Stitches   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Stitches

Thank-you

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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3 posted 01-28-2010 10:11 PM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

beautiful write
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4 posted 01-28-2010 11:46 PM       View Profile for Stitches   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Stitches

Thank-you

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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so true. i loved it :]
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6 posted 01-29-2010 04:47 PM       View Profile for Jeremy   Email Jeremy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeremy

Nicely written
Stitches
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7 posted 01-29-2010 04:48 PM       View Profile for Stitches   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Stitches

Thanks

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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