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Stitches
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0 posted 2010-01-28 01:21 PM


Take everything from me
Take every memory
and make it even.

They say when you take the person
The memories we treasure
but they serve to torment us
at the mind's leisure.

Make my mind at peace
Let me rest at ease
Let these false hopes cease
Now and forever
Let it be never.

If I can't have all
I'd rather not have any
There's no substitute
Though I've ripped through many.
You were the spider's web that caught my fall,
If I can't have you, I'd rather nothing at all.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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1 posted 2010-01-28 02:12 PM


enjoyed this!


Stitches
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2 posted 2010-01-28 02:13 PM


Thank-you

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

Leanne <3
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3 posted 2010-01-28 10:11 PM


beautiful write
-Lee

Stitches
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4 posted 2010-01-28 11:46 PM


Thank-you

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

Emi<3Naruto =]
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5 posted 2010-01-29 03:32 AM


so true. i loved it :]
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6 posted 2010-01-29 04:47 PM


Nicely written
Stitches
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7 posted 2010-01-29 04:48 PM


Thanks

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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