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HersheyKiss
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since 2008-06-02
Posts 137
New Jersey

0 posted 2010-01-23 12:25 PM


Your Child:

Daddy, will you play with me?
Daddy, come look and see!
Daddy, I want you to play too.
Daddy, I love you.

Why do you ignore these children’s remarks?
Why do you leave an innocent child in the dark?
Children need love and affection,
They need your guidance and most of all direction.

What would you do if your child lost their way?
Would you then have something to say?
What would you do if they blamed it on you?
Would you realize that there’s a chance they speak the truth?

How can you possible be so cruel?
How can you live with calling your child a fool?
Do you realize that words also hurt?
Do you know those words make your child feel less than dirt?

This is just a reminder to you,
That your children want you in their lives too.
So take the time to listen and love,
And your relationship with your child will soar above.

© Copyright 2010 Danielle - All Rights Reserved
precious pearls
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since 2009-07-24
Posts 110
NJ; United States
1 posted 2010-01-27 08:45 PM


great poem dani! very simple...yet the words meant so much!

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

Jeremy
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since 2010-01-29
Posts 14

2 posted 2010-01-29 05:03 PM


Awesome...
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