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Leanne <3
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I remember you once said
life is your canvas
Fill it with colours
And live in excess

"Love too deeply
And laugh awfully loud
Cause this life is your life
And it’s the only one you’re allowed”

I remember you sat me
Up high on your knee
Told me forgiveness
Was always the key

“Don’t live tomorrow
Crying over past pain
Live today for today
And freedom shall reign”

I remember you whispered
In my ear one night
Let go of your fears
And your soul will ignite

“Don’t be afraid
Of what you do not know
A strangers only a stranger
Until you say hello”

I remember you promised
You’d always be here
Even in illness
You’d still stay near.

“My little one
Now don’t you cry
My love is still love
From the heavens up high”

Inside this exterior, over which the eye might have roved there was the record of a pulsing life, which had learnt too well for its years – Thomas Har

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Klassy Lassy
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1 posted 01-19-2010 11:30 PM       View Profile for Klassy Lassy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Klassy Lassy

It's true, especially when you discover heaven in your heart.  

Lovely poem, Little One!  
m48
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2 posted 01-20-2010 02:03 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48

another well written poem. and what a story behind it. touching really.
Leanne <3
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3 posted 01-20-2010 06:57 PM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

thankyou both for your comments
ThatOneGuy
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4 posted 02-02-2010 02:22 AM       View Profile for ThatOneGuy   Email ThatOneGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThatOneGuy

I haven't written or been able to check the site in a long time. But, this is another great poem. You have a really good style that makes for a great read. well done
nehematala
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5 posted 02-02-2010 04:38 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

this is a really good poem

I love the verse

"Love too deeply
And laugh awfully loud
Cause this life is your life
And it’s the only one you’re allowed”

It is so true
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6 posted 02-02-2010 08:53 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Alot of wisdom in this piece. So true. And so touching. Great job.
the_inner_me11
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7 posted 02-02-2010 11:18 PM       View Profile for the_inner_me11   Email the_inner_me11   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_inner_me11

This is very well written in my opinion. I really liked it.(:
Emi<3Naruto =]
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i got kinda choked up when i read this. its very beautiful.
Leanne <3
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Thankyou all for your nice comments
-Lee
 
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