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I'm In Pieces

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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 01-17-2010 02:05 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

I'm walking in a direction
where nothing makes sense.
Its bare and filled with nothing,
and yet I see everything.

While I walk the road,
pieces of my heart fall.
I won't make it to the end,
because there'll be nothing left.

I'm running to you in pieces,
because I can't do this anymore.
I need you to make me well again,
I need you to believe in me.

These pieces are terrible,
there's one for each person
who hurt me deeply.
Can you put me back together?

I don't have the glue or tape
that I need to do this.
I need your love to help me
put my life together again.

julianna

everyone's normal [until you get to know them]

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madelyn
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1 posted 01-17-2010 09:56 PM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for madelyn


This poem was above your usual standards!! You are really coming along as a poet.

I hope to see more like it in the future.
Just.Another.Falling.Star
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2 posted 01-17-2010 11:02 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

thanks so much! i didn't think this was that great, but i'll let others decide that, haha.

julianna

everyone's normal [until you get to know them]

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