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kjsd
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0 posted 01-16-2010 03:06 PM       View Profile for kjsd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kjsd


you left today
you said i was an idiot
you said if i was smarter you would stay

when you left today i cried
when you left today the baby inside me was crying
when you left today you left the family

i did not let you get to me
i did cry but only because you left her your baby
i did not try to stop you i can only wish that you come back

i do need you
i do love you and so does she


when you come back we may have a family
when you come back we can show everybody that we love each other


if only you came back
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madelyn
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1 posted 01-17-2010 09:57 PM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for madelyn

Really good poem. Simple yet complex...

It could be extended to say why they left.

But really really good.

Hope to see more of this standard in the future.
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