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m48
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0 posted 01-13-2010 03:45 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for m48



honey on my window
rain on my toast
ink on my skin
all the things you dont know
six walls and a closet
soft bed
hand made blanket
water on the floor
air in the tub
coffee in the cup
thinking constantly
its hard to keep up
writing nonsense
just saine insanity
finding it easy
to bleed
things you cant see
books on the floor
carpet on the shelf
paper in the ocean
pencil broken
treasure under the water
sand in my lungs
unable to breath
quiet laughter
dont think im crazy
its just as well
writing poetry
feelings and stuff
like happieness and fear
things you dont hear

{ive been out of it latly, if that explains anything}
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MadMarcus
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since 11-25-2009
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1 posted 01-13-2010 04:22 PM       View Profile for MadMarcus   Email MadMarcus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MadMarcus

I dont think your out ^^ Its wonderful<3
Leanne <3
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2 posted 01-13-2010 06:35 PM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

i really really liked this poem, it makes you think!
m48
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3 posted 01-15-2010 03:57 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48

thank you for all your comments.i always like reading them.
UNTAMEDelegance
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4 posted 01-15-2010 04:25 PM       View Profile for UNTAMEDelegance   Email UNTAMEDelegance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for UNTAMEDelegance

I love it! Craziness and insanity are the spice of life. Besides, it's makes an odd sort of sense and we could all use a little bit of randomness. =D
             ~UNTAMEDelegance
kjsd
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5 posted 01-16-2010 10:59 AM       View Profile for kjsd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kjsd

sometims when you think your out of it you write better
 
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