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Teen Poetry #9

insanity...or something

m48
Member

since 2009-12-02

Posts 108

0 posted 2010-01-13 03:45 PM

honey on my window
rain on my toast
ink on my skin
all the things you dont know
six walls and a closet
soft bed
hand made blanket
water on the floor
air in the tub
coffee in the cup
thinking constantly
its hard to keep up
writing nonsense
just saine insanity
finding it easy
to bleed
things you cant see
books on the floor
carpet on the shelf
paper in the ocean
pencil broken
treasure under the water
sand in my lungs
unable to breath
quiet laughter
dont think im crazy
its just as well
writing poetry
feelings and stuff
like happieness and fear
things you dont hear

{ive been out of it latly, if that explains anything}

MadMarcus
Junior Member

since 2009-11-25

Posts 25
Sweden, Solna

1 posted 2010-01-13 04:22 PM

I dont think your out ^^ Its wonderful<3

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

2 posted 2010-01-13 06:35 PM

i really really liked this poem, it makes you think!

m48
Member

since 2009-12-02

Posts 108

3 posted 2010-01-15 03:57 PM

thank you for all your comments.i always like reading them.

UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

4 posted 2010-01-15 04:25 PM

I love it! Craziness and insanity are the spice of life. Besides, it's makes an odd sort of sense and we could all use a little bit of randomness. =D
~UNTAMEDelegance

kjsd
Member

since 2010-01-07

Posts 74
sd usa

5 posted 2010-01-16 10:59 AM

sometims when you think your out of it you write better

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