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poindexter39
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0 posted 2010-01-13 10:50 AM


When the woman you fancy is distanced from you
And that woman who cares has love that's true
You better hope she's ready too

For others to see
revealed wide open
From the smallest notion
and the couples squabble
Their eyes are judging with nothing too subtle

You open your heart for the world to judge
But the pain is slow, sluggish and testing
But if your love is true with faith unending
You'll both forever have your hearts lending


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