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Leanne <3
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since 08-25-2007
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N.S.W, Australia


0 posted 01-13-2010 04:10 AM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Leanne <3


hey guys i know i kinda dropped off the radar for a while there,  got caught up in the holiday season i guess.  This poem isn't my best at all just something thats been bugging me.  Hope all is well

You ask me for my help
And I come running straight away
Ready to do anything
Just to brighten up your day

You say you need to talk
Next thing weíre on the phone
And Iím up till 4am
So you donít feel so alone.

You ask me to stay and hold you
to help you forget for a while
And so I lay down next to you
In hope to see you smile

But no matter what it is I do
Or how long Iím by your side
I still canít make you happy
But donít say I never tried

Inside this exterior, over which the eye might have roved there was the record of a pulsing life, which had learnt too well for its years Ė Thomas Har

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RevengeIsMine
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1 posted 01-13-2010 08:11 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

A-Mazing.. i feel this SOO much atm..
m48
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2 posted 01-13-2010 03:32 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48

again another great poem. really can relate. i have had writers block latly.
great write it flowed.
 
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