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I feel alone

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Sheen
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0 posted 01-13-2010 01:16 AM       View Profile for Sheen   Email Sheen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sheen


I feel alone,
without your comfort
without your love,
I feel depressed
about two stars above.
Both picked by you and I,
but as I gaze upon them
this night, I fall and cry.
I live but feel numb,
for once I felt you
in my heart but I was dumb
to actually believe
that you loved me.
yet I was blind,
I did not see.
Never mind then,
which was the past
I have moved on
with a different cast.
But in this world,
till I die to bone
I will live on

and still feel alone....

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m48
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since 12-02-2009
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1 posted 01-13-2010 03:35 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48

nicly written. it had a flow. gave a good picture. great write keep it up.
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