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Drunken Insanity

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Drunken words plunge off
A trembled voice,
Into waves of wild winds,

With a snicker and a smile,
That swims

In and out
Of chipped lips.

With a dimple, or two, or three,
That disappear
Then reappear,
With delightful insanity.

With an, "Aha, ha-ha, hee-hee,"
Till a single fall
And a deep sleep,
Ends,

A drunken infidelity.

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

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1 posted 01-12-2010 08:57 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I really love how there's not many words in this poem. Lol. Its really good for its simplicity. Love it hun.

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2 posted 01-12-2010 12:28 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

from the title, I wasn't sure I was going to like this, but I did.
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Thanks!

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

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interesting i kinda got a little lost,but eh it was good.
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Thanks for the comment!

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

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