How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Main Forums
 Teen Poetry #9
 Loss of a soul
 1
Follow us on Facebook

 Moderated by: Acies, Dopey Dope, SEA   (Admins )

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Loss of a soul

 Post A Reply Post New Topic   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
poindexter39
New Member
since 11-19-2009
Posts 8


0 posted 01-09-2010 01:53 PM       View Profile for poindexter39   Email poindexter39   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poindexter39




Just one more day, I need to see your face
No more dismay for just one day
IF the only way to see u is for one last time
Coz thats one last time to keep you as mine

what happens when you dont care about the end
whether you die or not
about who loves you a lot
whether i live in a cot

Nothing matters to me, even if I
die a loney man
get hit by a van
or experience a sunburnt tan

im that of the loneliest people
Im feeling small, tiny and feeble

After doing my best
to prevent the pain
the pain of love, failure and heartbreak
i did everything i could for goodness sake

No more to worry
No more to need
I am dying, like a withering seed
i ran out of questions
and im out of answers
so when  nothing is left at the street's bend
I can only say that im loving the end
© Copyright 2010 poindexter39 - All Rights Reserved
MadMarcus
Junior Member
since 11-25-2009
Posts 25
Sweden, Solna


1 posted 01-10-2010 03:54 PM       View Profile for MadMarcus   Email MadMarcus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MadMarcus

I see myself in this poem <3
Well done mate.
 
 Post A Reply Post New Topic   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Main Forums >> Teen Poetry #9 >> Loss of a soul Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors