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m48
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0 posted 01-08-2010 11:33 AM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for m48


thinking it will be ok
it dosent seem so big at first
thinking it wont be a bother
like a feeling you get used to
or something
like a stephen king novel
with twists and secrets
even the auther cant know
depending on the secret
it eats from the inside out
every saine peice of mind
every loving chunk devoted to keeping
such a secret
now realizing
this is the secret that kills
the time has come to let it go
now to  begin the proccess
burning anything written
ripping up things sketched
finaly the real test
its time to forget it ever happened
which wont happen
probably always going to remember
but now at least liveing with it
wont threaten the life
it belongs to
so relax and know this is the right thing to do

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Snow_Angel
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1 posted 01-08-2010 07:59 PM       View Profile for Snow_Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Snow_Angel

This is very good. I have really been in that place where something that I have hidden has eaten away at me. And eventually, after a period of time, it did turn out alright.
 
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