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You Saved Me -- (Updated Piccy's Of Miss Amelia)

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RevengeIsMine
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since 07-08-2006
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Australia


0 posted 01-06-2010 07:40 PM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RevengeIsMine

So Amelia is now 1 year old!!.. She's still insainly beautiful and she makes me smile on the outside and in.. So here's a poem and some pictures for you!!

Miss Amelia Keagan

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First Birthday


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And Santa Came To Visit


Now For The Poem ...

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You Saved Me

You stood me up on trembling knees
The only one to hear my pleas
You wiped my face, cleared the tears
Comforted my anxious fears
You pulled the razor from my wrist
Before it even made a slit
You took the rope from around my neck
Said my life was not to wreck
You pulled me from my self-dug hole
Helped me reach a simple goal
You walked me down the crowded hall
Held my had so I wouldn't fall
You put forth much effort and strife
I give you credit for saving my life

And All Because You Called Me Mumma..


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Snow_Angel
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1 posted 01-06-2010 10:19 PM       View Profile for Snow_Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Snow_Angel

This is utterly beautiful.
kjsd
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since 01-07-2010
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sd usa


2 posted 01-07-2010 05:54 PM       View Profile for kjsd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kjsd

you write like a pro
RevengeIsMine
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3 posted 01-07-2010 11:14 PM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Thankyou both..

And as for the pro bit.. -- GOD I WISH!! :P
XxForever.BrokenxX
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Posts 887
Neverland


4 posted 01-07-2010 11:14 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Jess, you have the most beautiful baby girl I have ever seen. I always thought to myself that  you would make a wonderful mom, and im positive that is nothing but the truth. You are so gifted as a writer and you have a
beautiful heart in you. Never stop believing in yourself.
This is a wonderful write, as are all the rest. And like lots of your other poems this one makes me cry.  You always find the words for things.

Keep smiling pretty girl. I know you'll change the world some day, but don't worry 'cause I'll catch you if you fall.

   Lots of love,
                 Emily ♥

EmilyTheStrange
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I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

Leanne <3
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N.S.W, Australia


5 posted 01-13-2010 03:44 AM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

first of all Amelia is such a beautiful little girl!!

and secondly your poem was amazing.
take care
-Lee
Clockwork_Orange
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Space Camp, IN


6 posted 01-21-2010 07:06 PM       View Profile for Clockwork_Orange   Email Clockwork_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Clockwork_Orange's Home Page   View IP for Clockwork_Orange

wow. is all that comes to my lips. amazing like every time. im back for a while if you care to read. a brand new post is up and it a new one to read

~ you cant run from yourself ~

 
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