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m48 Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 108 |
this was kinda random&intentional at the time.(comments are encouraged.) _____________________ blackness surrounds this heart so fond at one time to others now seeks to be left alone finding more and more reasons to frown to let the tears flow down the shadows dont scare whats left of me change is comming as the tv lights up the corner of my room and the street light casts dancing clowns on my window no body sees whats really happening change is comming laughing now only once in a purple moon my sky dark blue true friends far and few are the ones to run to cracked streets greet me as the days go by lived in this town 15 years gone too damn long change is comming old reality about to shine through taking on some one we all knew thought she'd never return never say never change is near prepare for strength and a smirk to crack to moon and make streets crumle benieth you because change is here |
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Ravagence Member
since 2009-08-16
Posts 79 |
It's good, just some parts it would be easier to read and look at if it was stanza'd but like many other poets; it's a matter of style. Good read though. |
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