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The Inner Cold

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Snow_Angel
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0 posted 01-06-2010 08:42 AM       View Profile for Snow_Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Snow_Angel


The cold comes from within
Slowly freezing my veins
You made me this way

It numbs me
My worst enemy, yet my best friend
Never receding, always there

My only protecter
Guarding my heart from the pain
Frozen solid

No longer here
The cold has taken over
An icebox now stands in my place
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kjsd
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1 posted 01-07-2010 05:50 PM       View Profile for kjsd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kjsd

this was so good i wish i could write like that

Snow_Angel
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2 posted 01-07-2010 07:47 PM       View Profile for Snow_Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Snow_Angel

Thank you. Believe me, I'm not that good. Just a novice.
m48
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3 posted 01-08-2010 01:58 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48

totally been there,kinda there now. nice write takes you to a place where you have been or can relate to, neat.
 
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