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Not my best work to be honest. I'll most likely rewrite the last stanza cause it kinda sucks. But enjoy! :]
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couple Pictures, Images and Photos

They say that life is full of second chance
Another way to play our cards for another try
Another hope to try this thing called romance
Its crazy yet worth it but its rules I'll abide

Yes it takes a bit of luck to win this game
Not everyone will rise victorious in this fray
But we all yearn for that feeling all the same
So put on your makeup and put up a display

Flaunt what you got lovey and trust me you got it all
Those Sky Eyes are your trusty tool
But don't be sorry when on your knees you'll come back to crawl.
For we're all not lucky here just another fool.  
© Copyright 2010 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
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i for one, think its just fine. i always love the way you write, because it always makes sense and is relatable from alot of points of view.
great write once again!

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julianna

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