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m48
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0 posted 01-01-2010 01:33 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for m48




it stings at first when you puncture skin
then you get used to it
soon its so beautyful
something so perminent
something thats forever
it stays with you
no matter which road you take
it dosent care where you go
its there on ur heart for all to see
just like a tattoo


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1 posted 01-09-2010 12:49 AM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Maybe it's just me, but I don't get it.

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

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2 posted 01-09-2010 11:20 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

I like the thoughts here, but if you could expand on it maybe, try to expand the metaphor and tell us what you are comparing tattoos to. Love? Heartache?

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isn't it a song and i dont get it
madelyn
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4 posted 01-10-2010 08:13 PM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for madelyn

I think each person has a different view of this poem. I, myself, am thinking it is about heartbreak that wounds your heart but you keep living and you realize that all wounds close all cuts heal. And all your left of that person is a scar just like a tatoo.

May not of been the authors idea of what they were writing but each mind is different.

I really enjoyed the poem even if it wasn't that of my perception.

I really hope to see more of it's standerd from you, m48, in the future.

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5 posted 01-12-2010 03:30 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48

thank you all so much for posting.i didnt think this one would get much feed back.and as far as meaning goes madelyn pretty much hit it.
thank you again and i hope you all keep reading my work!
 
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