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Jaki H
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~Expectations~

I lose myself in fiction
to forget what's truly real
and fall in love with characters
so I'll never have to feel
the pain of being lonely
the pain of being me
in a world so full of liars
it's just so hard to see
that we should just be honest
simply speak our hearts
tell the story as it is
be upfront at the start
you see,
although we all have morals
few ever rise above
so in a world full of deceivers
fictionals are my true loves


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1 posted 12-28-2009 01:02 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Excellent topic and poem.  I think each of us at one time has fallen into a world of fiction to escape reality.
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this poem is so true, its so hard for people to be honest in relationships.

great write
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3 posted 12-29-2009 06:44 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I do exactly that. Reality can be boring and hard so I escape into exciting fiction books. You explained that fact very well.

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i like the last part "fictionals are my lovers " thats a line that sticks.
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thank you all <3
I'm glad you like it
 
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