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Funeral Procession

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Jaki H
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since 01-19-2008
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NJ, USA


0 posted 12-27-2009 02:18 PM       View Profile for Jaki H   Email Jaki H   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Jaki H

Hey hope you like it! Honest comments please

-Jaki H

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~Funeral Procession~

the subtle crackling
the overwhelming shame
a solemn line of students
marching towards the flames
they sacrifice their lives
for a chance to feel success
victims to the devil
scorched by scholasticismís stress
forward on, march
to the beating of the heart
slash the ties of friendship
prove that you are smart
and think nothing of the
anger, the fury the disgrace
of the parent whose vicarious dreams
blow up in his face
just walk straight into the fire
forget failure and donít cry
sometimes everything comes to nothing
your next in line- itís time to die

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m48
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since 12-02-2009
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1 posted 12-27-2009 03:05 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48

wow made me think for sure,kept me reading,great write.

keep it up and if ur new welcome from m48.
Jaki H
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since 01-19-2008
Posts 233
NJ, USA


2 posted 12-27-2009 03:37 PM       View Profile for Jaki H   Email Jaki H   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jaki H

thank you i'm glad you enjoyed it. im not new but i havent been on much lately... i look forward to reading your poems as well!
 
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