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A Poem For My Mother

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madelyn
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0 posted 12-23-2009 11:30 PM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for madelyn

I wrote this poem for my mum for christmas.
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Many people arenít as lucky as me,
For nobody has a mother as good as mine.
I hope to be like her in all her shine,
Although I would like to be able to make a meal to dine.
But she is mine,
My mother.

Sugar and spice and everything nice,
She keeps a hidden recipe for ice.
She may not be the smartest
And has a child whoís a smartass
But she is mine,
My mother

Until the very end,
Iíll always have a friend,
My mother.

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ThatOneGuy
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1 posted 12-26-2009 01:59 AM       View Profile for ThatOneGuy   Email ThatOneGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThatOneGuy

i like this alot. it is a different structure than i am used to seeing and i think it works well for you. good job
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