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madelyn
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since 2009-09-03
Posts 172
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0 posted 2009-12-23 11:30 PM


I wrote this poem for my mum for christmas.
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Many people aren’t as lucky as me,
For nobody has a mother as good as mine.
I hope to be like her in all her shine,
Although I would like to be able to make a meal to dine.
But she is mine,
My mother.

Sugar and spice and everything nice,
She keeps a hidden recipe for ice.
She may not be the smartest
And has a child who’s a smartass
But she is mine,
My mother

Until the very end,
I’ll always have a friend,
My mother.

***

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ThatOneGuy
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since 2009-10-27
Posts 33
Indiana, United States
1 posted 2009-12-26 01:59 AM


i like this alot. it is a different structure than i am used to seeing and i think it works well for you. good job
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