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untitled-on how society prohibits love
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untitled-on how society prohibits love |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
hey this is my newest poem!!! hope you like! and if you think of a title that would be fabulous! k thanx. by the way, in case this doesnt make sense, its about love that society wont allow <3 i know thats kind of cryptic too, but i dont neccessarily want to come right out and say it lol ----------------------------------- she was once my passion my everything, my life but love gave way to ration cutting heart strings as a knife and so love waits in heated strife boiling deep within my soul once joyous dreams of perfect life now hatred takes control and no one can suppress, console o horror of the "sin" we hear the deathbells as they toll the phobic laugh, they win they rise in gleeful rapture, and laugh and danse and spin they lay their righteous fire o they raise their torches higher o upon the funeral pyre- watch their prey! so upon the cross I lay my love crying in the crowd we both must pay today for the arduous love we vowed passion dripping, watch my shame are we not all one and same? |
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Snow_Angel Junior Member
since 2009-12-18
Posts 17 |
I really enjoyed reading this. It really shows your emotions. |
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