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Jaki H
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0 posted 12-22-2009 07:04 PM       View Profile for Jaki H   Email Jaki H   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Jaki H


hey this is my newest poem!!! hope you like! and if you think of a title that would be fabulous! k thanx.
by the way, in case this doesnt make sense, its about love that society wont allow <3 i know thats kind of cryptic too, but i dont neccessarily want to come right out and say it lol

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she was once my passion
my everything, my life
but love gave way to ration
cutting heart strings as a knife

and so love waits in heated strife
boiling deep within my soul
once joyous dreams of perfect life
now hatred takes control

and no one can suppress, console
o horror of the "sin"
we hear the deathbells as they toll
the phobic laugh, they win

they rise in gleeful rapture,
and laugh and danse and spin
they lay their righteous fire
o they raise their torches higher
o upon the funeral pyre-
watch their prey!

so upon the cross I lay
my love crying in the crowd
we both must pay today
for the arduous love we vowed

passion dripping, watch my shame
are we not all one and same?
© Copyright 2009 Jacqueline M. H. - All Rights Reserved
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I really enjoyed reading this. It really shows your emotions.
 
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