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Here's a story I'm familiar with...

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There was a soul with a fire burning
under a flood of sorrow.
Who's tears blind him terribly.
But he learned to look forward to tomorrow

True it wasn't sane of him
But he couldn't help but smile
His answer had been found.
"it would be over in a little while"

"I can make it. If I really try."
His very words; looking past his doubt
Though he shouted to the black clouds
With cheer for he found a way out.

Its odd really
and rare stories have a happy end
But I've found mine
and it started with a friend..

  

thank you guys
© Copyright 2009 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
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brilliant as always Zach, you're lucky to have friends like that

-Lee
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2 posted 01-24-2010 01:54 AM       View Profile for rebelangelv   Email rebelangelv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rebelangelv

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!! i loved it!!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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3 posted 01-24-2010 03:23 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

This is very special, Zach.

A
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i reallly like your poems. i feel like i can totally relate to them
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...i like your thinking.
..ideas seem like raindrops falling fast unto you.;p
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haha thanks you Tiny!

-Zach
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love it! really special!

x Kim x

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Although this doesn't follow the kind of rhythm  I prefer, when I actually try to understand it, I find that I enjoy it. This is a good poem.

But now I must consider my own devises, because I see that albeit the rhythm in my own poems, they may in fact be dull.
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BRILLIANT!
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Thank you everyone!

Wish I could find love.. But all I find these days are superficial fish in shallow waters.

 
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