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ThatOneGuy
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0 posted 12-20-2009 02:21 AM       View Profile for ThatOneGuy   Email ThatOneGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThatOneGuy


I still need to work on this one i think, but hopefully you guys have some opinions suggestions for it? lol thanks


Why Do I Still Love You?


One question haunts every thought
It is there no matter what I do
And the answer is one I'll never have
And it's all thanks to you

I can't seem to move on
And that will always hold true
Because the day I move on
Will be the day grass turns blue

I remember when you said
We could never be apart
We laid there together in my bed
On that night I handed you my heart

Some things always stay the same
Time doesn't always heal
And ever since that moment came
I haven't been able to feel

Every time you come to mind
I wish I couldn't think
Because the only thing I seem to find
Is more room for me to sink

Letting you back in
Is something I just can't do
But the question will always haunt me
Why do I still love you?
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1 posted 12-20-2009 10:03 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Wow dude, this is pretty good. (and this is the first time i've read your work) Keep writing!

-Zach
m48
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2 posted 12-21-2009 11:28 AM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48

wow, second poem i have read and its awsome i say if you feel the need to work with it go a head but its just fine the way it is as far as i am concerned. nicly written.
ThatOneGuy
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3 posted 12-23-2009 01:42 PM       View Profile for ThatOneGuy   Email ThatOneGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThatOneGuy

thanks guys i really appreciate the feedback
Emi<3Naruto =]
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4 posted 02-03-2010 01:30 AM       View Profile for Emi<3Naruto =]   Email Emi<3Naruto =]   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Emi<3Naruto =]

wow this is really beautiful. excellent job.
-Elainey
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5 posted 02-04-2010 07:07 PM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

amazing write! keep it up
-Lee
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6 posted 02-09-2010 02:23 PM       View Profile for UNTAMEDelegance   Email UNTAMEDelegance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for UNTAMEDelegance

This speaks to me. I've asked myself the question so many times with someone who I love, but don't get an answer. It's hard for me to find words to describe the feeling, but this poem captured the words that I coudldn't find. Great write! =^.^=
                                  ~UNTAMEDelegance
ThatOneGuy
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7 posted 02-16-2010 12:41 AM       View Profile for ThatOneGuy   Email ThatOneGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThatOneGuy

i'm glad this could speak to you. It's something i still struggle with (and actually have been alot today). But focusing on the positives in your life helps alot
julia1094
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8 posted 02-23-2010 08:46 PM       View Profile for julia1094   Email julia1094   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for julia1094

OMG!  the story of my life
the poem was so beautiful and it really hit home, i've been a situation like that for over a year and i know how hard it is to get over someone that you loved
BrittanyJ
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9 posted 03-02-2010 03:36 PM       View Profile for BrittanyJ   Email BrittanyJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrittanyJ

"Letting you back in
Is something I just can't do
But the question will always haunt me
Why do I still love you?"

This is my favorite stanza. But the whole poem is amazing.

Do you really love me? Or should i just let go now??

ThatOneGuy
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10 posted 03-05-2010 06:19 PM       View Profile for ThatOneGuy   Email ThatOneGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThatOneGuy

thanks guys
tiny_ME
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11 posted 03-06-2010 02:59 AM       View Profile for tiny_ME   Email tiny_ME   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tiny_ME

....i think my poem 'how can i move on' can relate to this a lot.

...great writing.
keep it up. ;p

*christina*
 
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