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Leanne <3
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0 posted 12-19-2009 08:49 PM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Leanne <3

I know this one just seems to go on and on but i felt like i just had to get it all out of my system. Enjoy.

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All dolled up
and no place to go
we popped the bottle;
my first blow.

One glass, two glass
five glasses more.
Just a little blurry,
Should’ve stopped at four.

phony excitement
gets the better of us
down the road we go
stumbling without fuss.

The lights make me dizzy
And so I begin to roam
You said just one minute
And I will walk you home

Staggering in the gutter
Singing my own song
Didn’t see it coming
Couldn’t sense the wrong.

All messed up
Trying to find my way
Something catches my eye
Who they hell are they?

My mind ticks over
I fumble for my phone
Look back at all the shots
That left me here alone.

I type in your number
I know it by heart
Phone rings out
And its all about to start

Redial redial redial
Panick settles in
Im yelling at the dial tone
Like it can save me from their sin

One punch two punch
Five punches more
Down on the ground
Wondering whats in store

I close my legs
I clench them tight
I’ll risk my life
To win this fight

The phone is ringing
I reach for mine
They’re screaming now
And at last resign

In the dark
I sit and stare
I start to cry;
Send up the flare

All dolled up
And no place to go
Where were you
When I took my final blow.


Inside this exterior, over which the eye might have roved there was the record of a pulsing life, which had learnt too well for its years – Thomas Har
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1 posted 12-19-2009 09:27 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

it did go on and on and on but honey it was worth it. You have such a lovely choice of words. Even i couldn't beat it. Keep writting.

-Zach
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2 posted 12-20-2009 02:15 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Amazing!!.. LOVE IT!!..

Well Done Lea!!
Leanne <3
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3 posted 12-20-2009 09:43 PM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

Thankyouu for your nice comments

and Zach of course you could write something like this, and a zillion times better

m48
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4 posted 12-21-2009 11:31 AM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48

again another great right. your poems are stories of their own and each one just a little diffrent then the last.
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5 posted 01-02-2010 03:34 AM       View Profile for duckboy   Email duckboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for duckboy

that was simply amazing
 
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