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I don't know who I am in here
And I've never felt quite as real
But i think it was worth it
to know i was so close.

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Zach this is a great piece.  I bet about 10 different times in my life, I felt this way.  Still am a work in progress   Well done!

            
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short and to the point i like it. good work
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for so little words, this peice sure made me think alot! it could be interpreted so many different ways, i loved it  
-Lee
 
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