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Falling rain
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this poem kinda just busted out of my brain. pardon me if it doesn't make much sense.

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oh tiny heart tell me where you've been
Shake off the dust you greedily hold
Tell me all you smelled and seen
while removing your tear cased mold

Whats that behind you tiny heart?
Is that a button and some twine?
Tell me when you fell apart
For I feel you once were mine

When was it again dear heart
That you were sewn to my very sleeve
Remind me again when you depart
For I might not be here when you leave

Go off on your way now
For I've stitched all your wounds
You've managed to hold yourself somehow
But I know I'll see you next time around

oh tiny heart go on without me
I'm just a burden at your side
Its better if I not be
there when you decide

To leave my wool sleeve..


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1 posted 12-19-2009 07:17 PM       View Profile for rebelangelv   Email rebelangelv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rebelangelv

wow pretty good
i like the idea of talking to your broken heart. very creative

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

Leanne <3
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2 posted 12-19-2009 07:45 PM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

i loved this!

"Whats that behind you tiny heart?
Is that a button and some twine?
Tell me when you fell apart
For I feel you once were mine"

that was my favourite part great write
-Lee
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3 posted 12-20-2009 08:59 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

thank you!
yea that was my favorite line too.
m48
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4 posted 12-22-2009 10:25 AM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48

what a delightful little poem. really made me think. i like it.
Jaki H
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5 posted 12-28-2009 11:37 AM       View Profile for Jaki H   Email Jaki H   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jaki H

awww i love it! this is exactly the type of poem i like best, and the rhyme scheme was great!
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I like this one! It's nice!

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

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7 posted 01-11-2010 04:04 PM       View Profile for MadMarcus   Email MadMarcus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MadMarcus

A very nice poem. I love it ^^
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Thank you
 
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