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minitechie
Junior Member
since 2008-05-26
Posts 23
california

0 posted 2009-12-18 02:23 PM



You said you loved me,
You said you cared.
You held my heart,
I shouldn't have dared.

Your words were calm,
You said no harm,
You broke my heart.
It's obvious,
You wanted out.

You said a lot of things,
You think i forgot?
I know you lied,
Our love,
It died.
Why?

Harlequin's Queen and Diablo's Daughter.

© Copyright 2009 Cheyenne Ewald - All Rights Reserved
precious pearls
Member
since 2009-07-24
Posts 110
NJ; United States
1 posted 2009-12-23 02:51 PM


Love this poem... very true and very emotional!

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

madelyn
Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 172
Purgatory
2 posted 2009-12-23 11:39 PM


wow really emotional poem... hard to forget but i dont know who would actually want to forget that lol.
Really really good

Keep up the magic

Madelyn

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