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Shimowada=Marshall in Japanese.

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minitechie
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0 posted 12-18-2009 11:43 AM       View Profile for minitechie   Email minitechie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for minitechie

This is the original,

I love you,
You left me,
You held me,
You lied to me.

I never thought you would,
You told me you wouldn't
You said you loved me,
You loved my body.

You showed me you cared,
You told me lies,
You held me close,
You hit me hard.
Your eyes would glow,
The honesty was low.
I was lost in false truths,
Yet, I loved you so.
Why, I do not know.
This is the revised.

I loved you,
You left me,
You held me,
You lied.

I never thought you would,
You told me you wouldn't
You said you loved me,
You only loved me for my body.

You showed me you cared,
You told me your lies,
Everyday i cried.
You held me close,
It hit me hard.
Your eyes were like lightning,
They gleamed like diamonds.
Your honesty was low,
I was lost in your lies.
I loved you so,
Why, I do not know.




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minitechie
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letting everyone know i was not actually hit by him phisically. what he did hit my heart hard.

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