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Stupid Rant.
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Stupid Rant. |
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Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia 
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I Hate the way you smile at me When I sing to my favourite song I hate it when you agree with me Even when you know im wrong I hate the way your eyes light up When they’re looking into mine I hate how when we’re going out You’re always there on time. I Hate it when you hold me close And keep me safe at night I hate that I need to be with you Or nothing ever feels right. I hate it when you tell me That I mean everything to you I hate that you say you love me And that I once believed it true. I Hate that you say I’m yours and that forever you’ll be mine and I hate I hate oh I just hate That im not the only one That you’re feeding that stupid line. Inside this exterior, over which the eye might have roved there was the record of a pulsing life, which had learnt too well for its years – Thomas Har |
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m48 Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 108 |
again another amazing write.i really enjoyed your rant. |
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Snow_Angel Junior Member
since 2009-12-18
Posts 17 |
I really love all of your poems, including this one. You are a beautiful writer. Kudos |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Great poem hun.  -Zach |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
i like itt!!!! maybe use some stronger diction, but i think the poem is great |
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Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia |
Thankyou everyone, your comments inspire me |
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ThatOneGuy Junior Member
since 2009-10-27
Posts 33Indiana, United States |
I COMPLETELY relate to this one. and it (as usual) was amazingly written. i really enjoy reading your work, because it always makes me think |
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