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Leanne <3
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0 posted 12-18-2009 01:21 AM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Leanne <3

I Hate the way you smile at me
When I sing to my favourite song
I hate it when you agree with me
Even when you know im wrong

I hate the way your eyes light up
When they’re looking into mine
I hate how when we’re going out
You’re always there on time.

I Hate it when you hold me close
And keep me safe at night
I hate that I need to be with you
Or nothing ever feels right.

I hate it when you tell me
That I mean everything to you
I hate that you say you love me
And that I once believed it true.

I Hate that you say I’m yours
and that forever you’ll be mine
and I hate
I hate
oh I just hate
That im not the only one
That you’re feeding that stupid line.


Inside this exterior, over which the eye might have roved there was the record of a pulsing life, which had learnt too well for its years – Thomas Har
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m48
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1 posted 12-18-2009 01:40 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48

again another amazing write.i really enjoyed your rant.
Snow_Angel
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2 posted 12-18-2009 08:20 PM       View Profile for Snow_Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Snow_Angel

I really love all of your poems, including this one. You are a beautiful writer. Kudos
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3 posted 12-19-2009 07:06 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Great poem hun.

-Zach
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4 posted 12-19-2009 12:51 PM       View Profile for Jaki H   Email Jaki H   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jaki H

i like itt!!!! maybe use some stronger diction, but i think the poem is great
Leanne <3
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5 posted 12-19-2009 07:47 PM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

Thankyou everyone,  your comments inspire me
ThatOneGuy
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6 posted 12-20-2009 02:26 AM       View Profile for ThatOneGuy   Email ThatOneGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThatOneGuy

I COMPLETELY relate to this one. and it (as usual) was amazingly written. i really enjoy reading your work, because it always makes me think
 
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