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minitechie
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0 posted 12-17-2009 01:32 PM       View Profile for minitechie   Email minitechie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for minitechie


Im still in love,
It's someone I can't have.
He lied to me,
Or so it seems.

He left me,
I tried to stay.
I thought he would come back,
Glancing my way.
He left me in the summer,
The eighth month of the year,
The 13th day.
I miss him,
Even today.

Harlequin's Queen and Diablo's Daughter.

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1 posted 12-17-2009 01:40 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

That happens and you wrote it so well.  

            
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awwww ive so been here. feelings for you! smile and remember every cloud has a silver lineing.
minitechie
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3 posted 12-18-2009 11:23 AM       View Profile for minitechie   Email minitechie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for minitechie

yea true. as my old biology teacher said, "There are more fish in the sea, some slimy some clean. Yet know this, there is a fish for every fishermen in the sea."

Harlequin's Queen and Diablo's Daughter.

Snow_Angel
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I love what your biology teacher said. This was very good. I enjoyed it
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5 posted 12-19-2009 07:04 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I think everyone has been through something like this. Well written.

-Zach
 
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