How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Main Forums
 Teen Poetry #9
 complicated addiction.....
 1 2 3
Follow us on Facebook

 Moderated by: Acies, Dopey Dope, SEA   (Admins )

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

complicated addiction.....

 Post A Reply Post New Topic   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
m48
Member
since 12-02-2009
Posts 106


0 posted 12-16-2009 12:44 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for m48

(its not perfect, but i like it.enjoy and coment please!)


like warm wine trickling down my spine
your words enter my heart
like silece on a battle field
after the guns and screaming have stopped
this is the voice i have
questions paint a picture of intrest
in my sleepless head
like those three words,
will they ever be said?
am i rushing things,
or going too fast?
smile in the day time
lay sleepless at night
the bottle is calling
just a sip no one will know.
this is my fight
longing for your company
my past begins to creep up on me
should i try it?
comfort in pain,
the tears are only alittle red.
its 2am,
would he mind a phone call?
too many thoughts still.
like the snow falling on the ground
the silence echos
the tv is on,muted by screaming thoughts
that have kept me up
the bottle begins to call again
stay away,its poison.
more questions,
will i ever be or am i already
his world?
does he know how strong he is?
how strong a man he must be
to deal with me?
that damn bottle wont stop calling.
stong enough to stay away,
weak at the knees.
the battle isnt done
im sleepy now
i lay my head on my pillow.
i begin to see my eyelids as they close
finally sleep
at last i can dream


© Copyright 2009 Tes - All Rights Reserved
Mysteria
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 03-07-2001
Posts 19652
British Columbia, Canada


1 posted 12-16-2009 03:10 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Ah, but does the person really dream?  A dull mind soaked in alcohol only leads to a hangover I would bet, and nightmares.   Nicely done.

            
Happy Holidays
♥ Mysteria ♥

MadMarcus
Junior Member
since 11-25-2009
Posts 25
Sweden, Solna


2 posted 12-16-2009 03:45 PM       View Profile for MadMarcus   Email MadMarcus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MadMarcus

This poem was like drinking a cold coca-cola on a hot summer day (One of my 5 greatest pleasure in life)!

Can only say one thing and that is that this was wonderfull... <3
m48
Member
since 12-02-2009
Posts 106


3 posted 12-16-2009 04:11 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48

much thanks to the comments! i also like the diffrent takes on my poem.
 
 Post A Reply Post New Topic   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Main Forums >> Teen Poetry #9 >> complicated addiction..... Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors